I
raised an eyebrow as Max walked into the courtyard. There were other members of
the base there, most of them throwing around a beat up baseball. We both
watched the group for a few moments before I observed her walking towards the them.
They appeared to be trying to split into teams—not very successfully if I might
add—because of the shortage of players. With gauze still tapped on her head, I
watched her talk to them for a few moments. Some of their gestures seemed to
get wild, if not aggravated to have a girl on their team.
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Tuesday, May 22, 2012
Saturday, May 12, 2012
Red Sandstorm Chapter 14
Max
sat on my bed watching me pack. There wasn’t a whole lot I could bring in this
large duffle bag. A huge list of forbidden items was held in her hands. Her
only job was to make sure I packed what I was told. Most of the drawers in our
room were pulled open and half empty—the other half being Max’s stuff. It
looked as if someone tried to rob the place with everything lying open.
Glancing to my sister, I watched her eyes skim down the list, occasionally
checking off the things I was supposed to bring. This wasn’t going to be easy,
leaving her here, but I couldn’t take her into the war zone either. Somehow it
was a miracle that we found a classmate of both Jade and I to watch Max here on
the base.
Friday, April 27, 2012
Red Sandstorms Chapter 13
Max
set down the three trays she was carrying precariously in her arms, not wanting
to spill anything. The little girl slid off the bed to grab a tray when Max shook
her head, moving the table over to the father and child. I watched the three
converse—looking rather happy. Setting two of the trays before both patients, I
saw my sister grab a chair to join them. It was good to see her so joyful in
such a bleak time; all the patients she had to treat day in and out must have
taken some toll on her. Seeing her laugh and munch with others was a definite
change. Especially since these two patients were enemies of the military and
she so openly rescued them and chatted with them like friends.
Monday, April 23, 2012
Red Sandstorms Chapter 12
“We’ll
be back in a few hours, okay Max? Thomas is going to watch you until we
return,” I said, ruffling my sister’s hair. I was kneeling down tying my shoe.
Her hand currently held a small stuffed penguin; a security item she had
brought with her—among other toys from her room—from our house. Glancing up at
her, I saw her head nod. Jade came over and knelt down with me.
“I’ll take good care of him, don’t
worry,” she said, hugging Max. We both stood and made our way around the
labyrinth of toys and furniture—part of a fort we had made earlier today.
Thomas and Max both walked us to the door.
Tuesday, April 17, 2012
Red Sandstorms Chapter 11
The man
laughed, finding what Max said amusing. He gestured to the chair, needle and
thread still in his hands.
“Calm down. I know what I’m doing,”
he said, laughing. “Max right? Well, you need to sit down and stay still so I
can sew this closed. If you’re in pain, just say my name and I’ll back off.”
Friday, April 13, 2012
Red Sandstorms Chapter 10
Max
giggled as we walked towards the school.
“You won’t hit any kids today, right? I don’t want to have to stop work to come take you out of class,” I said looking at her. It was no surprise that she laughed at me.
“I promise. No hitting,” Max said, swinging her metal lunchbox. “What if it’s an accident?” I stared at her blankly.
“You won’t hit any kids today, right? I don’t want to have to stop work to come take you out of class,” I said looking at her. It was no surprise that she laughed at me.
“I promise. No hitting,” Max said, swinging her metal lunchbox. “What if it’s an accident?” I stared at her blankly.
Tuesday, April 10, 2012
Red Sandstorms Chapter 9
My
eyes widened as I saw exactly who was in the driver’s seat. It had been years
since I had seen her and suddenly she was showing up during the middle of a
skirmish. Quickly looking to Max, I saw her stare for a few moments before
finally nodding.
Over the past while I had been
watching Max and her converse with others. Slowly, but surely I was able to
start to decipher words and understand what was going on, especially now.
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